Skip to main content

The first draft of my article

 Today's blog post I will show you my firts draft for my final project:


The first paragraph:


The second paragraph:


The third paragraph:


The fourth paragraph:


The fifth paragraph:



The sixth paragraph:                                                                                                                                           


The seventh paragraph:



 The eighth and ninth paragraph:

                                    
The two last paragraph:

Until now, I have learned that there are a lot of ifinancial impact of Covid-19 ad that we will have more problems in the next months.

On this draft of the article I should improve the main point of the whole major project, The financial problems that caused fromCovid-19. I think that I should put more details about this point.In addition I should remove some wwords/paragraphs of this news article, and to write better factors. 

I have received feedback from my Tutor and I will write another one post that it will contains the final article.



th 

Comments

  1. Jurian VisserDecember 19, 2020 at 11:12 PM

    It is great to see you have written a draft and are developing this further; however, it is essential to include critical commentary and reflection on the work. Look back at the work you have created and write about your actions, thoughts and the processes you used. What have you learned so far, what problems and challenges did you face and how did you solve these problems and how will you improve this work.

    ReplyDelete

Post a Comment

Popular posts from this blog

Blog Buddy

Last session, my tutor told me that I have a blog buddy. Blog buddy is someone who will comment on my posts every week. The reeason is that my blog buddy will help me to fix my posts. Moreover, I should do the same thing for my buddy. My blog buddy is girl and her name is Rozalia . You can find her blog if you click on this link . This is Rozalia: Three Interesting things about Rozalia First of all, her hobby is music. Secondly, She did a research for Tim Donor.If you click here you will find more information about her research. Thirdly, her major project is about language teaching methods, If you want to learn more about her project, you can click here. ABOUT ROZALIA Rozalia is 18 years old and she is from Szczecin, quite big city in Poland.In addition, she has two older siblings, a brother and a sister. She decided to move in UK for her studies and she is one of my fellow students in department of IYZ Media at DMU in Leicester. The next years at DMU, she want to learn a new language...
2 comments
Read more

Website creation

Hi everyone, In this blog I will write about how I made my website. To make my account I use this link Wix Website . I made a portfolio Website because I will make a article for my major project in Digital arts and I will upload it there. Part one: Firstly, I created a new website  I wrote some information for my self.In additioon,I choose the Portfolio because I want to write more thigs about me , everythng that I want to do in my future and some information for the University.I created this website for my University. Secondly, I wrote something about my self in the about me page.   Thirdly, I decorate my contact page. These is my website so far. You will can find more details on the next posts.
1 comment
Read more

How do I develop my work?

Today's post I will show you how do I develop my work: Also, made another one picture from Milanote  to describe the developing of the Cornonavirus.  Ideas generation  Firstly, I will explain to my audiences how this virus began: Sources: 1. https://abcnews.go.com/Health/timeline-coronavirus-started/story?id=69435165 2. https://www.bbc.com/news/world-51235105 3. https://www.gavi.org/vaccineswork/why-coronavirus-lockdown-necessary
2 comments
Read more