Draft for my Final project

 Hello,

This is my first draft of the final project:

Draft:

First Paragraph:

Afghanistan is a country in south central Asia.  For many years, there has been no equality between people, specifically women are considered inferior. Equality means to ensure that each human has an equal chance to make the most of their lives and talents. In addition, the belief that nobody must have poorer life opportunities, the reason is the way they come from, where they were born, whether they have a disability, or about their believes. The topic that I will discuss in this essay is the inequality that there I sin Afghanistan.

Second Paragraph:

In Afghanistan the inequality is very high and this has many implications. According to the Lauren (2018), the government say that they are prioritizing women but some statistics that they have made do not confirm it. An effect according to the government in 2014, that did statistics show that 80 % of all self-destruction in Afghanistan are committed by women, this situation making this place to be one of the few countries in the whole world that percentages are higher among women (Lauren Bohn, 2018). This is a very bad result because the world need strong women that will help the future about equality and not need ladies that want to destroy themselves. Furthermore, in 2008, the global rights points out that  the 90 % of women in Afghanistan  have experienced domestic abuse.

Third Paragraph:

Asila Wardak (2010), claims that “When it comes to many female parliamentarians, their remote control is with men. They are just sitting there. They don’t care about women’s empowerment.” This is words that said from an Afghan woman who lived some bad situations in this Country. When women entering public office have to pay a huge personal price ,such as, facing death threats, attack, and from anti-government assassination elements, as well as disapproval from within their own families. In recent years, several of women in public office have been murdered (David Cortright and Sarah Smiles Persinger, 2010). Τhis, also, happens in other countries but in this country happen the worst things.

Fourth paragraph:

Education is a very important piece for every person because it make us to learn new information, so we are more intelligent person for this world. However, in Afghanistan this not happened because according to Human rights watch (2017) a lot of kids live too away from a school to attend, which particularly affects girls. About 41 % of schools have no buildings, and many lack boundary walls, water, and toilets – disproportionately affecting girls. Since 2001 a key priority of the Afghan Ministry of Education (MoE) and international donors is the education. Some evidence shows that educating girls produces a myriad of private and public benefits, for instance, they marry later and have fewer and healthier babies and lower maternal mortality rates. Education for girls also boosts women’s participation in the labor force, which is greatly needed in Afghanistan. All women around the world have the right to be educated (David Cortright and Sarah Smiles Persinger, 2010).

Fifth paragraph:

Coy Dr. Maddy (2012) suggested that, ladies in Afghanistan never have any choices. They are doing whatever the men tell them. The reason is that man believe that the girls grow up to be happy and marriages are full of love in a relationship that they have to decide (Kevin, 2012). According to unisef (2015) the 3.7 million of children in Afghanistan are out-of-school, the 60% of them are girls.

Conclusion:

To sum up, we live in the year 2021 but still in some countries in this world there is inequality and abuse for women. Μen are more responsible for this issue because they underestimate the women . In this country is not fair for everyone. Some women, specifically the poor women cannot study in this country. Women have to claim their rights because they deserve it.

References:

Kevin Sieff, 2012, Afghanistan: Where women have no choice, Available from: https://theweek.com/articles/469523/afghanistan-where-women-have-no-choice

Education, Unicef Available from: https://www.unicef.org/afghanistan/education

Human rights watch, 2017, Children's Rights, Education, Women's Rights https://www.hrw.org/news/2017/10/17/afghanistan-girls-struggle-education

Lauren Bohn, 2018, 'We're All Handcuffed in This Country.' Why Afghanistan Is Still the Worst Place in the World to Be a Woman,  Available from: https://time.com/5472411/afghanistan-women-justice-war/

Cortright and Persinger  (2010), Afghan Women Speak, Enhancing Security and Human Rights in Afghanistan, Available from  https://kroc.nd.edu/assets/240260/afghan_women_speak_updated.pdf